story intro

well I haven't been posting for some time now so here you go as please tell me what you think.

“Shhh, sleep my darling sleep, you’ll be safe soon so, please sleep,” a shadowy figure slowly put a young infant into a shallow pond as small as fowl. This child was wrapped completely in cloth except for its face that seemed to glow in the treacherous night. The features of this child’s face would have made the devil cry, because her face was perfect and godly, the eyes changed color as well as her hair, skin as white as the moon and seem to shine as well. She was perfect but different like there was a cold evil feeling that would never let you feel joy again. And as the famine figure put down the girl she sang as if this was there last night. As she sang with a pain in her voice something happened the small baby closed her eyes and sank into the pond darkness surrounded her as if she was swallowed by a beast. Into the darkness of the pond as if it was miles deep not just a few inches.