Intro: As you sit on a hill you look down to the valley where you hope the horses will appear. Soon you see two, the leader of the group and a powerful stallion, and his partner, a pretty mare. As they race down the hill you wish you could join them and be free, you know can’t but hope that no one will find out about the band of wild horses. In the “the Black Stallion and the Red Mare” a short story by Gladys Frances Lewis you learn that sometimes you don’t want to do the right thing because it hurts.
Conclusion: As night comes you begin to cry because all the horses that you care for so deeply are gone. They’ve been stolen from the land that they called home and now will never again be free in tell they leave this place forever. “The Black Stallion and the Red Mare” tells how pain can come from doing the right thing.
Great intro Shea...way to go.
ReplyDeleteThis is super good! I really like it. Good job(:
ReplyDeleteNice thesis!
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