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Wednesday, June 9, 2010

Rose in death new

Rose in Death
“Shhh, sleep my darling sleep, you’ll be safe soon so, please sleep,” a shadowy figure slowly put a young infant into a shallow pond as small as fowl. This child was wrapped completely in cloth except for its face that seemed to glow in the treacherous night. The features of this child’s face would have made the devil cry, because her face was perfect and godly, the eyes changed color as well as her hair, skin as white as the moon and seem to shine as well. She was perfect but different like there was a cold evil feeling that would never let you feel joy again. And as the famine figure put down the girl she sang as if this was there last night. As she sang with a pain in her voice something happened the small baby closed her eyes and sank into the pond darkness surrounded her as if she was swallowed by a beast. Into the darkness of the pond as if it was miles deep not just a few inches.

Nearly 13 years later a small infant was found in this pool she looked just like the child who was put in this pool 13 years before but had amazingly long hair and could walk and talk in spite of being what looks like only 5 years old. This girl is the one who will bring death or pleasure where even she went but the people who found her didn’t know that, they thought that she was just a sick orphan.

“LalalalalaLAAAAAAAAAAla! Now this is great, the crops this year were perfect and papa said that we can go to the fair.” This was all a wonderers daydream by a young girl. She was thin, had blond nearly white hair, emerald green eyes, and nice soft pink skin that was covered in bruises, for she had been beaten by her father for no reason. This is the same girl in fact who finds the small child, right about now. “Aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh, oh my god oh my god,” ‘a guh w-what who, who are you where a-am I, and why is it so cold.” As you can tell that the first meeting for the two girls didn’t get off on the right foot. So now we will do a short summary of what happens in about the next 15 minutes. The girl the found the child and ran her back to a house which is her home. And during that time we find out her name is Mary and that she has two parents which were just as surprised as her to see the child, and then after making sure she was ok they started to question her. Now this is where we go back in to the story and tell it regularly. “So you don’t remember anything at all?” asked a farmer named Dave (he’s father of Mary) “well I do remember one thing,” “what’s that?” “My name it is Alice Rose Ripper.” … “ really that’s good,” wow this kid is weird and what’s with name, I bet she just made it up off the top of her little head and how can she walk and talk so well when she has to be only 5 years old?! Well this guy thinks rude thoughts what a weirdo thought Alice (she had read his mind for those who didn’t know); I wish he would go away, thought Alice. “well in short will try and find your parents all right,” “Hm, oh well thanks for the offer but there actually in town and some thing scared me, that why you found me passed out because I tripped and blacked out,” but the look on Dave’s face told her he wasn’t believing her at all and he also wasn’t let her go so easily. “Well I’m sure they wouldn’t mind us dropping you off right?” drat “well, fine I lied, but I’d really rather just go back to the orphanage I came from all right,” “Why you poor dear don’t worry well take you in,” this came from Kate the farmer’s wife. Oh god, where the heck are all of these idiots coming from. “Um, p-papa,” “what is it you brat,” “well the traders are in town today aren’t you going” “yes I am but when we get back you better have everything cleaned up or no table scraps, GOT IT!” “Y-yes papa” SLAM… Alice got bored and spoke “well their a horse’s butt” “oh don’t say that their, their… ok their a horse’s butt” Alice stared at her for what seemed like forever. “Do want him gone and the wife” “yes” Mary mumbled “well then get your stuff,” Alice started to smile like the Cheshire cat while Mary just stared at her like she was an angle, “were leaving, now.”

So an hour later both Alice and Mary where off, away from Dave and Kate. But what they didn’t know was that they being followed by the people they were trying to escape, or did they know. “Don’t panic but were being followed,” murmured Alice she sound deadly and Mary was afraid to speak but she said in and low and frighten voice “ they won’t give up in tell they die right, well they should do just that,” “ right on, hey know you’re not human right?” “What” “well you’re part human your dad probably was one and your mom was a demon” “really, wow” “you’re part lam; mom was a ram demon not as common as some of the other but you, you’re down right rare.” Mary couldn’t say a thing just think then she spoke “is it ok if I curse them?” Alice started to smile but didn’t say a thing, “Hey you brat’s come here, NOW” Dave finally came out same with Kate. Mary move and looked at them think of her daydream earlier and looked at the girl that she had found then pointed at them and said something that no one nearby but Alice understood. She held up three fingers and said “1, 2, 3.” And that was the end of Dave and Kate.

Mary head was in chaos, it was war ground in there half of her wanted to believe that this was just a horrible dream and that she would wake up soon, but the other half told her she was awake and that she was right for destroying Dave and Kate. And the worst part was that her entire body was burning like it was in a volcano, Alice said it was normal when you found out your a demon, oh why her. “Hey I told you not to be depressed got it” “sorry, hey is your name really Alice or something else” “ Hmmm, yeah my name is Alice but call me whatever you want ok” “Kay.” They didn’t speak for the rest of the night.


Now you’re probably are wondering what the heck is going on and how Alice knows all that she shouldn’t know anything right? Well your wrong, Alice actually does know a lot she just doesn’t have a lot of memory about her past with her parents just a blurry vision of a black things.

“Ugh” Mary woke up bright and early the next morning, she reach up to scratch her head when she felt something soft and puffy. “WHAT THE” racing to the pond Mary started to pray that she wouldn’t died, but if she had noticed anything else at the time, it probably would’ve noticed that she didn’t have anymore pain in her body. But all she cared about was seeing her reflection, but that didn’t help anyhow. “ OH MY GOD, ALICEEEEE‼‼” “What are you screaming…” Alice saw what Mary had screamed at, she now had ears small lams ear and a puffy tail right at the end of her tail bone. “Wow, you got those fast than normal” “just tell me what the heck is happening” Your half demon and you use your powers so your got something to show off now” “pleases just tell me how to make them disappear pleaseeeeeees” “OK you just think of them gone, but you might want to know that there already gone” “huh” Mary patted her head and backside there was no tail or ear to be felt. Alice was board once again so she did something interesting, she talked to Mary using just her mind. Hi, Mary was startled but didn’t talk she somehow know that that was Alice so she talked back, Hey, well this is cool, ya, lets go to the village nearby to get food, Kay. So they set out to find food in a nearby village but what they didn’t know was that this village was abounded by all except a small god, one that was waiting for something to happen, something that would wake him up to the human world once again.

Now as the two girls walked up to the village they knew that it was old and probably abandoned, but they kept right on walking. Because both of the girls kept thinking one thing, this place has food right? Well it did but they noticed some things well looking for a meal, there were dead bodies everywhere, they had lost any rotting smell that they had a long time ago, and most buildings were smashed everywhere.
But then they found a restaurant fill with warm food so they instantly for got every thing else other than the food. After 2 hours of eating till their guts felt like popping out of their bodies. They left the restaurant and they spoke what they thought about the town. Mary went first “You know this town is so weird, I mean not a lot of towns have… dead… bodies….. everywhere” they stopped looked right at each other and did what any two girls would do, they screamed out this “ WHAT THE,OH GOD!!!!” they spoke at the same time well talking to each other, “why did we not think this was weird when we came in oh god, god, god, god.” Then they passed out. And to make it clear passing out is when you go over hyper and fell asleep. Blacking out is when you fell asleep for no reason at all, and fainting is when your over scared.

Well when they woke they were in a cave and surround by cute little critters. They were as big as a large dinner plate, white except the eyes those were red also they were furry. Soft fluffy cat like fur, white feathered wings, and along tail with a turf of hair at the end, that’s also what they look like.

1 comment:

  1. I loved your introduction! It was so descriptive and detailed. I like the word choice as well. It truely felt like I was the infant. Good job!

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